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The purple bud.

Posted: Wed Apr 10, 2024 1:11 pm
by Niruja
I wrote a paragraph . Could you please correct and give some tips to improve my skill.

There was a purple bud.
That's pretty much it.
I picked it for me
Then I realized
I killed a bud before Bloss.
But I couldn't replace it.
Even my tears were not as
precious as bud life.

Re: The purple bud.

Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2024 1:37 pm
by Maliheh
I like it