if you like to complete

[shakespear]

we start this poetry, each one has his role:

she:
look at me and tell me am i you

i:
i don't know you, so don't ask me who?
you are sad like me, so i don't like to see
we're two souls in one body will be
or two wings of one bird flying high
in a vast sky, you, with me, tie

she:
No ties no vows you wont regret
Iam like ashes ready to hit
Stay away dont forget
Im your dankness your mess
Stay away dont get in

i:
i'll stay out not to make sin
you fill my ears with din
like smoke i can enter everywhere
and travel during future
my heart once told me about her
don't love, you'll torture

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thanks in advance

[dreamer]

i:
listen to your heart dear
life is full with these
look here look there you'll see
life is not smoke not din

don't look to past even in dreams
you still have hope so carry the beams
light your life your soul
light it maybe you light my seeds

[shakespear]

my heart dies when we meet
and i can't walk, move my feet
touch my chest and sense my pulse
you'll feel something else
don't cry for me or be sad
you're worse, your state is bad

[dreamer]

I touch your chest l sense your plus
I feel something else
I find shiny dreams with little smiles
Shy tears unspoken eyes
Tell me who were you are

[shakespear]

Tell me who were you are

how did u use 2 auxiliaries in this sentence, i couldn't understand it because of this...i couldn't name it as grammatical mistake ...but i thought it was a mistake...may be u have another purpose using this form....so plz explain it
2nd : i dont feel wishing to write lines of poetry...i don't know Y....u'r psychologist and can analyse my state.....
all friends have nice moments...

[dreamer]

well about grammar u know i hate it so much cuz it ties me

[shakespear]

freedom doesn't mean leaving grammar or writing wrong terms...we've to follow grammar to write correct sentences....e.g: i saw he....here we have to use him instead of he koz it is object here....and so on>>>>

[dreamer]

ok :(

[shakespear]

just ok..................waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw

[dreamer]

because i have nothing else to say

[shakespear]

u have so much as i think...u r full of secrets,filled with contradicts, filled with goodness, filled with badness....filled with ......lots of things

[shakespear]

y dont reply dreamer???

[dreamer]

Sometimes slience express thoughts well

[shakespear]

tell me more...i like to listen to u...i wana learn from u much

[dreamer]

Nothing to write nothing to tell
Our words are our treaures that's what a freind said

[shakespear]

these words r mine, my loyal friend...plz tell me wt u like to write ....u stopped writing lines

[shakespear]

Shy tears unspoken eyes

shy tears unspoken eyes
confused dream so high flies
when will you water my thirst?
and guide me in dire mist
hug me to sleep for long
your heart's pulse is lovely song

complete .....

[shakespear]

let me nip on your arm
and make me so calm
softly tickle my head
your fingers on my cheek sled

[dreamer]

long time i didn't see your face
long time i didn't look deeply in your eyes
they are like thousand of thunders
thousands of nights and what dark nights can i see

[shakespear]

thousands of nights and what dark nights can i see

so long lind

[shakespear]

The man has not to put himself inside walls of silence and shell inside these walls, because he will find himself later that he pursues a mirage, and that he was sad reared its head from behind the words which is unmeaningful

[shakespear]

so it's my role but i can't fine u here, i think u left this game...if u like to continue so plz reply here and let's continue our game

[dreamer]

image a light inside a lighter
how shine can be ... how sad is he
surround with thousand siege how he can be free
like child catching a dream
like flower bending in breeze just waiting a chance to be released

[shakespear]

so lovely...u r still the best my loyal friend, i wana teach from u lots

[dreamer]

i guess its ur turn do'nt go away

[shakespear]

u made me do this game with u, and u suddenly stopped , and as u know, in the beginning i didn't wish to say poetry but u could Pull the rug from under my feet in one way or other, i was like ice, without senses and u warmed me and now i feel like the first step...really i feel dead...i d k
but thanks 4 every thing

[dreamer]

it's ok let's stop the game

[shakespear]

y??? wt apity!!! i hoped u say ur role , and u say my role but not stopping

[dreamer]

i wrote my lines

[shakespear]

where's your line and if u wrote it then write another line instead of me, read my last comment carefully

y??? wt apity!!! i hoped u say ur role , and u say my role but not stopping