How to shorten this sentence

Feel free to post here :)

Moderator: EC

Post Reply
User avatar
Fayaz
New
New
Posts: 2
Joined: April 22nd, 2022, 9:57 am

How to shorten this sentence

Post by Fayaz »

Hi

Please help me anyone to shorten the following sentence

Eating Ice cream in the winter season is hard, but eating ice cream in the summer season is simple.
User avatar
TellClass
Top
Top
Posts: 53
Joined: October 6th, 2021, 10:32 am

Re: How to shorten this sentence

Post by TellClass »

Eating ice cream in the winter is hard, but eating ice cream in the summer is simple.

No need to use the word "season".

Alternatively, you could word it like this:
It's easy to eat ice cream in summer, but not in winter.
TellClass Online English Tutors
Improve Your English Speaking Skills! Practice with qualified English tutors from around the world.
âś… 1-TO-1 Private Lessons
âś… Flexible Bookings.

Book a 10-minute trial lesson here: https://www.tellclass.com.
User avatar
Fayaz
New
New
Posts: 2
Joined: April 22nd, 2022, 9:57 am

Re: How to shorten this sentence

Post by Fayaz »

Thank you very much. It is very helpful
User avatar
Billychacha
New
New
Posts: 1
Joined: June 11th, 2022, 6:57 am

Re: How to shorten this sentence

Post by Billychacha »

Shorten it like: "Eating ice cream in summer is easy but not in winter."
Learn new tips and tricks for your WordPress website from How-toWP.
User avatar
onesmartsheep
New
New
Posts: 2
Joined: October 17th, 2022, 8:01 am

Re: How to shorten this sentence

Post by onesmartsheep »

I think the best way to shorten a sentence is by adding a full stop in the place of a conjunction. If two independent sentences are joined with a conjunction, there is no harm in separating them as both of them will not lose their individual meanings.
User avatar
elizabeth
Rising
Rising
Posts: 15
Joined: April 23rd, 2024, 8:18 am

Re: How to shorten this sentence

Post by elizabeth »

How about this: "Eating ice cream is harder in winter than in summer."
User avatar
toolsnip
New
New
Posts: 1
Joined: June 25th, 2024, 1:27 am

Re: How to shorten this sentence

Post by toolsnip »

Eating ice cream is hard in winter but easy in summer.
Post Reply