Check the sentence below please. Is it okay?
Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.
okay here?
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Here is mine:Based on actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot, while without the experience or knowledge, you might feel not so easy to understand my introduction.
Actual experience or perceptual knowledge would help you a lot. You might feel hard to understand my introduction without them.
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