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Hi everybody .. :W: Hi Red Rose :W: ..
shokin and others tried to anlays Trees poem .. They told us what the poet mean .. Know I will try to analys its device ..

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Joyce Kilmer. 1886–1918


I THINK that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree.

A tree whose hungry mouth is prest
Against the sweet earth's flowing breast;

A tree that looks at God all day,
And lifts her leafy arms to pray;

A tree that may in summer wear
A nest of robins in her hair;

Upon whose bosom snow has lain;
Who intimately lives with rain.

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
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Joyce Kilmer. 1886–1918

I THINK that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree.

BETWEEN ( SEE + TREE ) rhyme ... I am not sure why is important but it give us a nice voice which make us feel the poem more .
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I will return with more analys .. tomorrow ... share me .. Red Rose come on let me see your smart brain ,, Mam dont forget me please ..
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I wouldn't like :W: :W: to involve my name.

so I am sorry, I can't analyse your so-called poem.
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:lol:
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RedRose wrote:I wouldn't like :W: :W: to involve my name.

so I am sorry, I can't analyse your so-called poem.
Sorry but what do you mean "so-called poem"? Trees is a great poem created by a great poet, who is Joyce Kilmer (1886–1918)-an American poet. Trees is one of the most beautiful poem I've ever read.

http://www.risingdove.com/Kilmer/love_trees.html
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ok, ok.
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RedRose wrote:I wouldn't like :W: :W: to involve my name.

so I am sorry, I can't analyse your so-called poem.

hi .. When I put your name between :W: red rose :W:
thats mean I respect you and you are not like others
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BLACK DEATH wrote:
hi .. When I put your name between :W: red rose :W:
thats mean I respect you and you are not like others
Hmmm... sounds the other way round to me...
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BLACK DEATH wrote:
RedRose wrote:I wouldn't like :W: :W: to involve my name.

so I am sorry, I can't analyse your so-called poem.

hi .. When I put your name between :W: red rose :W:
thats mean I respect you and you are not like others
I don't think so. in China, we think :W: means "sucks"
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In China... and everywhere!!
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yes, that is why I decided to ignore BLACK DEATH.

BLACK DEATH is supposed to go back to kindergarten to learn some polite ways.
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:lol:
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BLACK DEATH wrote:I THINK that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree.

A tree whose hungry mouth is prest
Against the sweet earth's flowing breast;

A tree that looks at God all day,
And lifts her leafy arms to pray;

A tree that may in summer wear
A nest of robins in her hair;

Upon whose bosom snow has lain;
Who intimately lives with rain.

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
It looks like the first. :mrgreen:
A tree whose hungry mouth is prest
Against the sweet earth's flowing breast;
A tree is always hopefull, self-confident, active.
A tree that looks at God all day,
And lifts her leafy arms to pray;
Always faithfull, and does not hesitate to ask for help.
A tree that may in summer wear
A nest of robins in her hair;
Always lively and all are welcome to the tree.
Upon whose bosom snow has lain;
Who intimately lives with rain.
Tree needs contact. All beings, too.

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RedRose wrote:
BLACK DEATH wrote:
RedRose wrote:I wouldn't like :W: :W: to involve my name.

so I am sorry, I can't analyse your so-called poem.

hi .. When I put your name between :W: red rose :W:
thats mean I respect you and you are not like others
I don't think so. in China, we think :W: means "sucks"
I AM SO SORRY BUT THATS YOUR PROBLEMS ..
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RedRose wrote:yes, that is why I decided to ignore BLACK DEATH.

BLACK DEATH is supposed to go back to kindergarten to learn some polite ways.
I am wonder-struck .. I did not think that Red Rose ignore me ..
However, it is hard life . we can not get what we want always.
Thanks a lot RedRose .. I promise you that I will not noise you again in this club .. I am here to learn Eng.
God bye .....
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Concentrate yourself into your poem.

May the force be in you and get out of you. :mrgreen:

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BLACK DEATH wrote: I AM SO SORRY BUT THATS YOUR PROBLEMS ..
You have no need to say sorry.

I won't care about what you say until you graduate from your kindergarten.

Good luck.
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Gloup ! a conflict ! (better than no conflict !)

Be as wise as a tree !

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shokin wrote:Gloup ! a conflict ! (better than no conflict !)

Be as wise as a tree !

Shokin
Shokin, I am with you. Yeah, please be wise and be polite! :mrgreen:

The misunderstanding is the difference in cultures. We are here to futher understand other friends and their cultures. Try to mutually comprehend to be friends or we might be foes. Why don't we come back to the lovely poem Trees?
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I suggest Black Death to edit the first post.

we should realize different culture in order to respet different culture. right?
Noun by Noun, Verb by Verb: It is details that make writing interesting.
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shokin wrote:Be as wise as a tree !
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Dixie your job and mine is

laughing :lol: :lol: :lol:


:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Diamond wrote:Dixie your job and mine is

laughing :lol: :lol: :lol:


:lol: :lol: :lol:
Badly many people have lost this job.

By luck, we are here ! :lol: :lol: :lol:

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:evil: :evil: :evil: I still have not lost my job :!: I just loved your comparison :D
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Dixie wrote::evil: :evil: :evil: I still have not lost my job :!: I just loved your comparison :D
I see that you have not lost this job. I thought about others people (not on this forum, in some great cities, stressed).

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