i wrote tha "Please take your notice of fur falling out".
i wonder if it correct or not not correct. If it's wrong, please recorrect it for me. Thank you very much :)
please make correct the sentenses for me
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Re: please make correct the sentenses for me
orange wrote:i wrote tha "Please take your notice of fur falling out".
i wonder if it correct or not not correct. If it's wrong, please recorrect it for me. Thank you very much :)
How about this one?
Pay attention, fur is falling down.
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Re: please make correct the sentenses for me
loveisblue wrote:orange wrote:i wrote tha "Please take your notice of fur falling out".
i wonder if it correct or not not correct. If it's wrong, please recorrect it for me. Thank you very much :)
How about this one?
Pay attention, fur is falling down.
My situation is the noticement i must make to send my partner about one kind of fabrics which have further to product bags. This further can be fall down a lolts if you don't be careful. I've ever been worried about it.Anyway I send it to my partner my writing long time ago . I think they understood what i mean b/c until now they still don't ask me what did your writting mean yet
If they ask me, i'll answer them by all of your sentences in order. They will understand what i want to say :D :D
Thank you very much and now maybe love will be orange
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Re: please make correct the sentenses for me
Yeah, orange is a beautiful colour and an orange love must be a wonderful love. heheheorange wrote: Thank you very much and now maybe love will be orange