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Please check my paragraph for grammatical errors

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Sai Gon was a heart-breaking place
It was late in the afternoon, the rays of sunlight turned red-orange through the leaves flickering in the wind. The streaks of sunlight shine on the sad face of the girl wandering on the street corner. With heavy footsteps and wistful eyes, she was lonely making her way through the bustling streets. She walked on the straight road with no turns, a familiar path led to a house in the alley that she rented. In a drunken stupor, she became drifting and out of consciousness. Her mind was confusing and she fell down toward the curb.
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