Turkish Queen

[shakespear]

Turkish Queen
Everything without her means nil
Can one live without food or drink?
Eve asked Adam – before- a will
You drowned me, you made me sink
------------------------------------ (1)
Why did I see you " Turkish Queen"?
What a bad trouble you put me in!
What a lovely dream I have seen!
I loved you but it's not my sin
------------------------------------ (2)
I thought you are hard, proud, unsweet
Why did you make me your best friend?
I wish you hate me and we didn't meet
You made me love you, it's my end
------------------------------------ (3)
Womanizer you called me bad
I'm really bad, I don't deny
Some beings are happy, some are sad
Times we're Devils, or angels fly high
------------------------------------ (4)
Your face and hair are moon and night
Your cheeks are ripe apples "Just smell"
Don't touch, you'll spoil the lovely sight
Sick one smells your cheeks to be well
------------------------------------ (5)
Your lips are red roses, hide a smile
Call the thirsty to have a kiss
For your sake I walk mile by mile
Without Turkish Queen, I'm aimless
------------------------------------ (6)

[dreamer]

you know while I'm reading this i imagine this queen as a picture i only i couldn't imagine her clothes you only focus on face

words are simple with thoughtful meanings i loved that so WELCOME BACK ☺☺

[shakespear]

you're so clever to notice this point...i dont know why i ddnt describe clothes...u r right...englsih club lost u when u decided not to contact much as past...all ur notices were useful for me...i learnt much from ur notices and comments...but i blame u now that u were late to comment..i was waiting and every hour i visit to see ur comment...any way to reach late butter than not reach for ever...thnx

[dreamer]

you're right coming late is better than not reach at all... anyway why you choose Turkish queen why Turkish your civilization is full with wonderful queens with great myths Semiramis for example she was pretty and brave queen who named with Queen of Doves

[shakespear]

ok u'r r8...but we have 2 renew our writings...its my point of view...we must to create our characters as we see at reality...plz let me see ur lines in describing clothes...give my some example...in this poem...plz

[farah]

Womanizer you called me bad
I'm really bad, I don't deny
Some beings are happy, some are sad
Times we're Devils, or angels fly high

I LIKE THIS STANZA...THE FOURTH LINE IS DIFFICULT
GENERALLY I LIKE ALL THE POEM
YOU ARE VERY GOOD POETRY
DO YOU REMEMBER ME??

[shakespear]

hello my frnd farah:
of course i remember u..u hid for long time..where have u been??
any way...thnx 4 ur lovely comment
about the 4th line..i meant sometimes we're good as angels and sometimes we're bad as devils ...
any difficulties ??? i think it's clear
thanks again on ur praise but i'm not very good poet....here in this club lots of good poets
u've to correct ur word" poetry" ...the correct is " poet"

plz keep contact or this site will end

[farah]

SORRY IF I MADE THIS MISTAKE...I MEANT POET...I WORT IT QUICKLY
I KNOW YOU ARE AN ENGLISH TEACHER AND YOU PUNISH WHO MAKES MISTAKES IN ENGLISH
PLEASE FORGIVE ME ABOUT THIS MISTAKE
I SHALL KEEP CONTACT IF YOU WRITE ANEW POEM
THANKS A LOT

[shakespear]

its ok ...don't worry
we all make mistakes here or there
about new poems...i dont know if i can continue with this faded club...i don't know but at the past there were many poets and poetesses ...all were good and great...now i dont feel that desire to write new poems..may be koz of lack of comments and lack of good readers to poems...
any way
thanks for ur comments
i hope u show me ur face instead of these lovely roses
have nice moments

[farah]

I'VE CHANGED MY PICTURE
SEE YOU TOMORROW
BYE

[shakespear]

u r more beautiful than those lovely roses.. u r so charming!
y u hid ur beauty b4??

[farah]

THANKS TEACHER

[shakespear]

hello
how could u issue this photo?
really i need to learn this kind of posts
please farah, teach me that
have nice moments

[farah]

HELLO TEACHER,
ARE YOU REALLY DON'T KNOW HOW TO SEND PICTURE?
IT IS VERY SIMPLE
[img]url[/img]

URL IS THE ADDRESS OF THE PICTURE YOU WANT TO SEND
IT IS MY PLEASURE TO GIVE YOU AN INFORMATION
REGARDS TEACHER

[shakespear]

i'll try ur way to issue this lovely kissing image

[shakespear]

hello
i couldn't do it...y??

[farah]

[shakespear]

waw how u did it ? y i can't do it??
let me try again

[shakespear]

[shakespear]

[shakespear]

hello....at last i could do it
thank u friend

[farah]

CONGRATULATIONS
U DID IT AT LAST

[shakespear]

thanks lots
yeh at last i could do it
thanks for teaching me this

[shakespear]

where are you now my friend????????
i hope we can contact to be sure of ur health
have nice moments

[shakespear]

RENEW OLD POEMS