How can I write more concisely

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justMvk
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How can I write more concisely

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Hi!

Please help in following question:

I have a website that advertises some services.

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Here you can quickly find out the cost of my services.
In other words, how much money the client will have to pay for my work.
How can I write this more concisely?

"Find out the cost - it's fast!" or "Check the price - it's quick!"

or otherwise ?
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Re: How can I write more concisely

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Hello,

"Quick price check" works well and is concise.

Good luck with your website.
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thanks for such variant.

and what do you think about? : Check my rates! It's quick!

I like this variant because it is more emotionally
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Re: How can I write more concisely

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justMvk wrote:thanks for such variant.

and what do you think about? : Check my rates! It's quick!

I like this variant because it is more emotionally
This works well.
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Check Prices!
Check Prices Now
Check the Rates
Get the Quote
Get the quote you are looking for
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