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SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:01 am
by shakespear
SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .


THANKS ALOT

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 11:07 am
by denvinbo
Good..... :)

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 12:15 pm
by Sunnypk
it's nice
you are written very effective poem I like it

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 6:40 am
by shakespear
thanks a lot all of you . :)

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:22 am
by shakespear
Thanks a lot to everyone who encourages me and good luck ,

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 10:16 am
by shakespear
Hi . Our life is short,so why we don`t enjoy our selves.

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:36 am
by EliasJ
hi you are a good writer and i encourage you to continue writing and i am waiting for you next poem
good luck :P

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 10:12 am
by shakespear
thank u
EliasJ
u really engourage me
good luck

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:30 am
by shakespear
hi everone
why do we forget to read or to write?
answer me!
c u soon

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 12:21 pm
by shakespear
hi
every one always needs to be encouraged, don`t u think?
c u soon good luck
bye

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:17 am
by shakespear
hi everyone and goodluck

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:55 am
by farah
speaking frankly
i think its rather artificial ,unnatural.
sorry but its my point of view.

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2010 7:05 pm
by shakespear
hello and thnx

Re: SOUL & NIGHT[b][/b]

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 10:34 am
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:SOUL & NIGHT
World was sinking in dark
Calmness was spread in everywhere
Everything was quite quiet
Even stars sank in deep sleep
Winds were motionless
Trees were like statues
As they, too, were quiet
Suddenly I felt her, coming towards me
Hard, I could touch her
So I traveled so far
To the far place where the ease was
I settled there for ever more
And forgot, but her, the whole
My soul swam in heights
Flew, like birds, in the sky
And hold her tightly
Without any feelings .
i remember the time of writing.....and the situation